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In my story the protagonist goes to live in a health resort. The receptionist presents her with a brochure of activities. At the moment I have written like this in a word document;
After patiently listening to my story, she pulled out the resort
brochure and pointing out with the pen in her hand she said;
“Here, this one looks like something interesting for you.”
Transformation Intensive Programme -- £1500 – 3 months
Activity A with Jacob
Activity B with Daniel
Activity C with Tara.
Activity D with Tom
Should I design this before I send it to the publisher (just in case I am fortunate enough to get one ;)) Or should I just present it in a word table. Will this be also designed for the book?
style formatting book
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In my story the protagonist goes to live in a health resort. The receptionist presents her with a brochure of activities. At the moment I have written like this in a word document;
After patiently listening to my story, she pulled out the resort
brochure and pointing out with the pen in her hand she said;
“Here, this one looks like something interesting for you.”
Transformation Intensive Programme -- £1500 – 3 months
Activity A with Jacob
Activity B with Daniel
Activity C with Tara.
Activity D with Tom
Should I design this before I send it to the publisher (just in case I am fortunate enough to get one ;)) Or should I just present it in a word table. Will this be also designed for the book?
style formatting book
edited 4 hours ago
Cyn
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asked 8 hours ago
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In my story the protagonist goes to live in a health resort. The receptionist presents her with a brochure of activities. At the moment I have written like this in a word document;
After patiently listening to my story, she pulled out the resort
brochure and pointing out with the pen in her hand she said;
“Here, this one looks like something interesting for you.”
Transformation Intensive Programme -- £1500 – 3 months
Activity A with Jacob
Activity B with Daniel
Activity C with Tara.
Activity D with Tom
Should I design this before I send it to the publisher (just in case I am fortunate enough to get one ;)) Or should I just present it in a word table. Will this be also designed for the book?
style formatting book
edited 4 hours ago
Cyn
25.9k2 gold badges57 silver badges118 bronze badges
asked 8 hours ago
cool_bodhicool_bodhi
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In my story the protagonist goes to live in a health resort. The receptionist presents her with a brochure of activities. At the moment I have written like this in a word document;
After patiently listening to my story, she pulled out the resort
brochure and pointing out with the pen in her hand she said;
“Here, this one looks like something interesting for you.”
Transformation Intensive Programme -- £1500 – 3 months
Activity A with Jacob
Activity B with Daniel
Activity C with Tara.
Activity D with Tom
Should I design this before I send it to the publisher (just in case I am fortunate enough to get one ;)) Or should I just present it in a word table. Will this be also designed for the book?
style formatting book
style formatting book
edited 4 hours ago
Cyn
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Typically, in a prose novel, you would describe the brochure, not reproduce it.
After patiently listening to my story, she pulled out a resort brochure titled Transformation Intensive Programme, and pointing out with the pen in her hand she said; “Here, this one looks like something interesting for you."
It cost £1500!
It would be possible to include it as an illustration, but that would be unusual. Children's novels are often illustrated, adult's novels occasionally are, and there are some novelty books that heavily feature graphics. Unless you're serving as your own illustrator, however, those details would be left to the illustrator. In any case, it would definitely be premature to focus in on them now.
Occasionally, a writer will use a hybrid technique, as in your example, of suggesting a menu or a pamphlet or other printed object through typesetting, or occasionally boxing it off. There is no standard way of doing this, and the way you have of indicating it in your manuscript is fine. If you want to go further you can add notes to the editor in square brackets. That's probably not recommended however, unless it's absolutely essential. You can always discuss it with your editor after you have a deal in hand.
After patiently listening to my story, she pulled out the resort brochure and pointing out with the pen in her hand she said; “Here, this one looks like something interesting for you.”
[Note to Editor: Please include the following in a box, and in an elegant typeface]
Transformation Intensive Programme -- £1500 – 3 months
Activity A with Jacob
Activity B with Daniel
Activity C with Tara.
Activity D with Tom
answered 7 hours ago
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Typically, in a prose novel, you would describe the brochure, not reproduce it.
After patiently listening to my story, she pulled out a resort brochure titled Transformation Intensive Programme, and pointing out with the pen in her hand she said; “Here, this one looks like something interesting for you."
It cost £1500!
It would be possible to include it as an illustration, but that would be unusual. Children's novels are often illustrated, adult's novels occasionally are, and there are some novelty books that heavily feature graphics. Unless you're serving as your own illustrator, however, those details would be left to the illustrator. In any case, it would definitely be premature to focus in on them now.
Occasionally, a writer will use a hybrid technique, as in your example, of suggesting a menu or a pamphlet or other printed object through typesetting, or occasionally boxing it off. There is no standard way of doing this, and the way you have of indicating it in your manuscript is fine. If you want to go further you can add notes to the editor in square brackets. That's probably not recommended however, unless it's absolutely essential. You can always discuss it with your editor after you have a deal in hand.
After patiently listening to my story, she pulled out the resort brochure and pointing out with the pen in her hand she said; “Here, this one looks like something interesting for you.”
[Note to Editor: Please include the following in a box, and in an elegant typeface]
Transformation Intensive Programme -- £1500 – 3 months
Activity A with Jacob
Activity B with Daniel
Activity C with Tara.
Activity D with Tom
answered 7 hours ago
Chris SunamiChris Sunami
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Thank you very much for the answer. It just explains everything.
– cool_bodhi
7 hours ago
@cool_bodhi - You're welcome! Please feel free to accept this answer with the checkmark (unless you are waiting for additional answers).
– Chris Sunami
5 hours ago
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Typically, in a prose novel, you would describe the brochure, not reproduce it.
After patiently listening to my story, she pulled out a resort brochure titled Transformation Intensive Programme, and pointing out with the pen in her hand she said; “Here, this one looks like something interesting for you."
It cost £1500!
It would be possible to include it as an illustration, but that would be unusual. Children's novels are often illustrated, adult's novels occasionally are, and there are some novelty books that heavily feature graphics. Unless you're serving as your own illustrator, however, those details would be left to the illustrator. In any case, it would definitely be premature to focus in on them now.
Occasionally, a writer will use a hybrid technique, as in your example, of suggesting a menu or a pamphlet or other printed object through typesetting, or occasionally boxing it off. There is no standard way of doing this, and the way you have of indicating it in your manuscript is fine. If you want to go further you can add notes to the editor in square brackets. That's probably not recommended however, unless it's absolutely essential. You can always discuss it with your editor after you have a deal in hand.
After patiently listening to my story, she pulled out the resort brochure and pointing out with the pen in her hand she said; “Here, this one looks like something interesting for you.”
[Note to Editor: Please include the following in a box, and in an elegant typeface]
Transformation Intensive Programme -- £1500 – 3 months
Activity A with Jacob
Activity B with Daniel
Activity C with Tara.
Activity D with Tom
answered 7 hours ago
Chris SunamiChris Sunami
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Thank you very much for the answer. It just explains everything.
– cool_bodhi
7 hours ago
@cool_bodhi - You're welcome! Please feel free to accept this answer with the checkmark (unless you are waiting for additional answers).
– Chris Sunami
5 hours ago
add a comment |
Typically, in a prose novel, you would describe the brochure, not reproduce it.
After patiently listening to my story, she pulled out a resort brochure titled Transformation Intensive Programme, and pointing out with the pen in her hand she said; “Here, this one looks like something interesting for you."
It cost £1500!
It would be possible to include it as an illustration, but that would be unusual. Children's novels are often illustrated, adult's novels occasionally are, and there are some novelty books that heavily feature graphics. Unless you're serving as your own illustrator, however, those details would be left to the illustrator. In any case, it would definitely be premature to focus in on them now.
Occasionally, a writer will use a hybrid technique, as in your example, of suggesting a menu or a pamphlet or other printed object through typesetting, or occasionally boxing it off. There is no standard way of doing this, and the way you have of indicating it in your manuscript is fine. If you want to go further you can add notes to the editor in square brackets. That's probably not recommended however, unless it's absolutely essential. You can always discuss it with your editor after you have a deal in hand.
After patiently listening to my story, she pulled out the resort brochure and pointing out with the pen in her hand she said; “Here, this one looks like something interesting for you.”
[Note to Editor: Please include the following in a box, and in an elegant typeface]
Transformation Intensive Programme -- £1500 – 3 months
Activity A with Jacob
Activity B with Daniel
Activity C with Tara.
Activity D with Tom
answered 7 hours ago
Chris SunamiChris Sunami
38.3k3 gold badges48 silver badges142 bronze badges
Typically, in a prose novel, you would describe the brochure, not reproduce it.
After patiently listening to my story, she pulled out a resort brochure titled Transformation Intensive Programme, and pointing out with the pen in her hand she said; “Here, this one looks like something interesting for you."
It cost £1500!
It would be possible to include it as an illustration, but that would be unusual. Children's novels are often illustrated, adult's novels occasionally are, and there are some novelty books that heavily feature graphics. Unless you're serving as your own illustrator, however, those details would be left to the illustrator. In any case, it would definitely be premature to focus in on them now.
Occasionally, a writer will use a hybrid technique, as in your example, of suggesting a menu or a pamphlet or other printed object through typesetting, or occasionally boxing it off. There is no standard way of doing this, and the way you have of indicating it in your manuscript is fine. If you want to go further you can add notes to the editor in square brackets. That's probably not recommended however, unless it's absolutely essential. You can always discuss it with your editor after you have a deal in hand.
After patiently listening to my story, she pulled out the resort brochure and pointing out with the pen in her hand she said; “Here, this one looks like something interesting for you.”
[Note to Editor: Please include the following in a box, and in an elegant typeface]
Transformation Intensive Programme -- £1500 – 3 months
Activity A with Jacob
Activity B with Daniel
Activity C with Tara.
Activity D with Tom
answered 7 hours ago
Chris SunamiChris Sunami
38.3k3 gold badges48 silver badges142 bronze badges
answered 7 hours ago
Chris SunamiChris Sunami
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answered 7 hours ago
Chris SunamiChris Sunami
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answered 7 hours ago
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Thank you very much for the answer. It just explains everything.
– cool_bodhi
7 hours ago
@cool_bodhi - You're welcome! Please feel free to accept this answer with the checkmark (unless you are waiting for additional answers).
– Chris Sunami
5 hours ago
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Thank you very much for the answer. It just explains everything.
– cool_bodhi
7 hours ago
@cool_bodhi - You're welcome! Please feel free to accept this answer with the checkmark (unless you are waiting for additional answers).
– Chris Sunami
5 hours ago
Thank you very much for the answer. It just explains everything.
– cool_bodhi
7 hours ago
Thank you very much for the answer. It just explains everything.
– cool_bodhi
7 hours ago
@cool_bodhi - You're welcome! Please feel free to accept this answer with the checkmark (unless you are waiting for additional answers).
– Chris Sunami
5 hours ago
@cool_bodhi - You're welcome! Please feel free to accept this answer with the checkmark (unless you are waiting for additional answers).
– Chris Sunami
5 hours ago
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