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Usage of blank space in trade banner and text-positioning


Drawing attention to this banner by using colorStucturing information on this trade show bannerTemplates / variable length text / consistent spacing vs. consistent spaceCritique: Best use of typographic space and negative space in this design?Remove extra space in front of the text without outlining it? [Illustrator]Inkscape: design and print a banner with an appropriate resolutionHow can I minimize the space between the text and footnote rule?Does the positioning of this text negatively affect readability?How do magazines and newspapers allocate ad space to perfectly fill each issue?Stucturing information on this trade show banner






.everyoneloves__top-leaderboard:empty,.everyoneloves__mid-leaderboard:empty,.everyoneloves__bot-mid-leaderboard:empty margin-bottom:0;








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and thanks for your continued feedback on my trade banner that I am creating for my friend pro-bono. I've consolidated all the feedback from to create the below:



  • Stucturing information on this trade show banner


  • Drawing attention to this banner by using color


My issues at the moment:



  • Still a bit clueless about what to put in the empty space and its been bothering for the best part of a few days. Any ideas? The company in respect is building a no-code development platform.


  • Text all around the middle looks a bit claustrophobic, maybe my mind doesn't like the centering of the first two blocks and the left alignment of the bullet points. There's too much space to the right of the left justified stuff. I've mooted centering the text and dropping the icons but then I lose some colour as a result.


Note that the empty space below the opsonion.com logo is intentionally left blank (that's where the roll up holders will sit).



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Image with borders:



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    3















    and thanks for your continued feedback on my trade banner that I am creating for my friend pro-bono. I've consolidated all the feedback from to create the below:



    • Stucturing information on this trade show banner


    • Drawing attention to this banner by using color


    My issues at the moment:



    • Still a bit clueless about what to put in the empty space and its been bothering for the best part of a few days. Any ideas? The company in respect is building a no-code development platform.


    • Text all around the middle looks a bit claustrophobic, maybe my mind doesn't like the centering of the first two blocks and the left alignment of the bullet points. There's too much space to the right of the left justified stuff. I've mooted centering the text and dropping the icons but then I lose some colour as a result.


    Note that the empty space below the opsonion.com logo is intentionally left blank (that's where the roll up holders will sit).



    enter image description here



    Image with borders:



    enter image description here










    share|improve this question




























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      and thanks for your continued feedback on my trade banner that I am creating for my friend pro-bono. I've consolidated all the feedback from to create the below:



      • Stucturing information on this trade show banner


      • Drawing attention to this banner by using color


      My issues at the moment:



      • Still a bit clueless about what to put in the empty space and its been bothering for the best part of a few days. Any ideas? The company in respect is building a no-code development platform.


      • Text all around the middle looks a bit claustrophobic, maybe my mind doesn't like the centering of the first two blocks and the left alignment of the bullet points. There's too much space to the right of the left justified stuff. I've mooted centering the text and dropping the icons but then I lose some colour as a result.


      Note that the empty space below the opsonion.com logo is intentionally left blank (that's where the roll up holders will sit).



      enter image description here



      Image with borders:



      enter image description here










      share|improve this question
















      and thanks for your continued feedback on my trade banner that I am creating for my friend pro-bono. I've consolidated all the feedback from to create the below:



      • Stucturing information on this trade show banner


      • Drawing attention to this banner by using color


      My issues at the moment:



      • Still a bit clueless about what to put in the empty space and its been bothering for the best part of a few days. Any ideas? The company in respect is building a no-code development platform.


      • Text all around the middle looks a bit claustrophobic, maybe my mind doesn't like the centering of the first two blocks and the left alignment of the bullet points. There's too much space to the right of the left justified stuff. I've mooted centering the text and dropping the icons but then I lose some colour as a result.


      Note that the empty space below the opsonion.com logo is intentionally left blank (that's where the roll up holders will sit).



      enter image description here



      Image with borders:



      enter image description here







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          This is merely my opinion... take it all with a grain of salt.



          Realize that I know nothing about your company, it's audience, the target market, the nature of the trade show. What you sell, what you profit from, who your owners are.. etc.... all of this helps target a design.



          I have merely focused on visual elements in your given image. This is a visual rework, not a marketing rework, which may or may not be needed.




          I think overall... it's a boring design. It's not a bad design, by any means. It's just not very enticing or interesting. Everything is centered, flat, straight on. Nothing to promote motion or interest.



          I actually, thought your original banner was far more engaging due to angles and minimalism. This one..... looks like 80% of the trade show banners I've ever seen.... nothing to make me walk across the room.



          I think you should stick closer to your instincts as shown in your first design.



          • Use angles to promote "action" and "movement".

          • Use color to pull the eye around


          • Don't be afraid of being "bold" with large, prominent type.

          enter image description here



          Merely suggestions....






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          • @methuselah It's a quick and dirty mockup in Photoshop. There's zero point in me sharing anything. A) you couldn't use any of it for production and b) I trashed the file when I was done.

            – Scott
            7 hours ago











          • Thanks. The team love it. They want to scrap what we currently have for it haha.

            – methuselah
            7 hours ago











          • Please realize, I know nothing about your company other than what the banner shows. And this was literally pieced together in 5 minutes using your PNG. Ideally, I'd rework the 3 bullets as well, but given I was starting with merely a PNG, I didn't bother to go into those.

            – Scott
            7 hours ago












          • What would you suggest with regards to re-working the three bullets?

            – methuselah
            7 hours ago











          • Darker type (maybe the blue with orange icons), perhaps larger.. hard to say without exploring it directly. Remember.. people may be 25-50 feet away.

            – Scott
            7 hours ago


















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          Claustrophobic text:



          I think your current issue is that this text is too similar to the text below. It's a tad bigger but otherwise same color, same weight. I would try to increase the differences so the eye doesn't get confused with those two levels.



          "Empty" space



          I would try to add some depth and create unity by reusing small elements in the illustrations lower in the banner. Those rounded strokes and maybe small cubes. If you make them bigger, it'll add depth, but do make sure the color isn't too contrasting so that the elements don't steal the main focus.



          You should also minimize this space by lowering the design in the banner to add a bit more space at the top. It's hard to control what people see around your banner so giving some breathing room to that logo can't hurt it, and it addresses the empty space concerns at the same time.



          Edit re: OP's comment: I do think there's too much space on the right of the three points. I would not align them to center, but I would push the group, towards the center and have its left edge sit aligned with something else on the banner, likely the left side of the left-hand character in your visual.






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          • Thanks for the feedback! What are your thoughts on there being too much space to the right of the left justified stuff? Should the feature text be centred? Also, have added an extra image showing where the borders are.

            – methuselah
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            @methuselah I've updated my answer :)

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          • +1 "I would not align them to center" -- line for line centering is boring :)

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          I would



          • center-align all text content

          • make the logo, main headline and website address 15% smaller, which would leave just about the right amount of whitespace around the edges

          • move the website address up and make it look like a blue rounded corners button on a white background

          • remove yellow and red borders, remove blue background

          • possibly add some more decoration around the text objects





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          • HI @Lucian, I've updated the banner since. Keen to hear your thoughts: imgur.com/a/Y5E5PBa

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          • Looking good man.

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          This is merely my opinion... take it all with a grain of salt.



          Realize that I know nothing about your company, it's audience, the target market, the nature of the trade show. What you sell, what you profit from, who your owners are.. etc.... all of this helps target a design.



          I have merely focused on visual elements in your given image. This is a visual rework, not a marketing rework, which may or may not be needed.




          I think overall... it's a boring design. It's not a bad design, by any means. It's just not very enticing or interesting. Everything is centered, flat, straight on. Nothing to promote motion or interest.



          I actually, thought your original banner was far more engaging due to angles and minimalism. This one..... looks like 80% of the trade show banners I've ever seen.... nothing to make me walk across the room.



          I think you should stick closer to your instincts as shown in your first design.



          • Use angles to promote "action" and "movement".

          • Use color to pull the eye around


          • Don't be afraid of being "bold" with large, prominent type.

          enter image description here



          Merely suggestions....






          share|improve this answer



























          • @methuselah It's a quick and dirty mockup in Photoshop. There's zero point in me sharing anything. A) you couldn't use any of it for production and b) I trashed the file when I was done.

            – Scott
            7 hours ago











          • Thanks. The team love it. They want to scrap what we currently have for it haha.

            – methuselah
            7 hours ago











          • Please realize, I know nothing about your company other than what the banner shows. And this was literally pieced together in 5 minutes using your PNG. Ideally, I'd rework the 3 bullets as well, but given I was starting with merely a PNG, I didn't bother to go into those.

            – Scott
            7 hours ago












          • What would you suggest with regards to re-working the three bullets?

            – methuselah
            7 hours ago











          • Darker type (maybe the blue with orange icons), perhaps larger.. hard to say without exploring it directly. Remember.. people may be 25-50 feet away.

            – Scott
            7 hours ago















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          This is merely my opinion... take it all with a grain of salt.



          Realize that I know nothing about your company, it's audience, the target market, the nature of the trade show. What you sell, what you profit from, who your owners are.. etc.... all of this helps target a design.



          I have merely focused on visual elements in your given image. This is a visual rework, not a marketing rework, which may or may not be needed.




          I think overall... it's a boring design. It's not a bad design, by any means. It's just not very enticing or interesting. Everything is centered, flat, straight on. Nothing to promote motion or interest.



          I actually, thought your original banner was far more engaging due to angles and minimalism. This one..... looks like 80% of the trade show banners I've ever seen.... nothing to make me walk across the room.



          I think you should stick closer to your instincts as shown in your first design.



          • Use angles to promote "action" and "movement".

          • Use color to pull the eye around


          • Don't be afraid of being "bold" with large, prominent type.

          enter image description here



          Merely suggestions....






          share|improve this answer



























          • @methuselah It's a quick and dirty mockup in Photoshop. There's zero point in me sharing anything. A) you couldn't use any of it for production and b) I trashed the file when I was done.

            – Scott
            7 hours ago











          • Thanks. The team love it. They want to scrap what we currently have for it haha.

            – methuselah
            7 hours ago











          • Please realize, I know nothing about your company other than what the banner shows. And this was literally pieced together in 5 minutes using your PNG. Ideally, I'd rework the 3 bullets as well, but given I was starting with merely a PNG, I didn't bother to go into those.

            – Scott
            7 hours ago












          • What would you suggest with regards to re-working the three bullets?

            – methuselah
            7 hours ago











          • Darker type (maybe the blue with orange icons), perhaps larger.. hard to say without exploring it directly. Remember.. people may be 25-50 feet away.

            – Scott
            7 hours ago













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          5









          This is merely my opinion... take it all with a grain of salt.



          Realize that I know nothing about your company, it's audience, the target market, the nature of the trade show. What you sell, what you profit from, who your owners are.. etc.... all of this helps target a design.



          I have merely focused on visual elements in your given image. This is a visual rework, not a marketing rework, which may or may not be needed.




          I think overall... it's a boring design. It's not a bad design, by any means. It's just not very enticing or interesting. Everything is centered, flat, straight on. Nothing to promote motion or interest.



          I actually, thought your original banner was far more engaging due to angles and minimalism. This one..... looks like 80% of the trade show banners I've ever seen.... nothing to make me walk across the room.



          I think you should stick closer to your instincts as shown in your first design.



          • Use angles to promote "action" and "movement".

          • Use color to pull the eye around


          • Don't be afraid of being "bold" with large, prominent type.

          enter image description here



          Merely suggestions....






          share|improve this answer















          This is merely my opinion... take it all with a grain of salt.



          Realize that I know nothing about your company, it's audience, the target market, the nature of the trade show. What you sell, what you profit from, who your owners are.. etc.... all of this helps target a design.



          I have merely focused on visual elements in your given image. This is a visual rework, not a marketing rework, which may or may not be needed.




          I think overall... it's a boring design. It's not a bad design, by any means. It's just not very enticing or interesting. Everything is centered, flat, straight on. Nothing to promote motion or interest.



          I actually, thought your original banner was far more engaging due to angles and minimalism. This one..... looks like 80% of the trade show banners I've ever seen.... nothing to make me walk across the room.



          I think you should stick closer to your instincts as shown in your first design.



          • Use angles to promote "action" and "movement".

          • Use color to pull the eye around


          • Don't be afraid of being "bold" with large, prominent type.

          enter image description here



          Merely suggestions....







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          • @methuselah It's a quick and dirty mockup in Photoshop. There's zero point in me sharing anything. A) you couldn't use any of it for production and b) I trashed the file when I was done.

            – Scott
            7 hours ago











          • Thanks. The team love it. They want to scrap what we currently have for it haha.

            – methuselah
            7 hours ago











          • Please realize, I know nothing about your company other than what the banner shows. And this was literally pieced together in 5 minutes using your PNG. Ideally, I'd rework the 3 bullets as well, but given I was starting with merely a PNG, I didn't bother to go into those.

            – Scott
            7 hours ago












          • What would you suggest with regards to re-working the three bullets?

            – methuselah
            7 hours ago











          • Darker type (maybe the blue with orange icons), perhaps larger.. hard to say without exploring it directly. Remember.. people may be 25-50 feet away.

            – Scott
            7 hours ago

















          • @methuselah It's a quick and dirty mockup in Photoshop. There's zero point in me sharing anything. A) you couldn't use any of it for production and b) I trashed the file when I was done.

            – Scott
            7 hours ago











          • Thanks. The team love it. They want to scrap what we currently have for it haha.

            – methuselah
            7 hours ago











          • Please realize, I know nothing about your company other than what the banner shows. And this was literally pieced together in 5 minutes using your PNG. Ideally, I'd rework the 3 bullets as well, but given I was starting with merely a PNG, I didn't bother to go into those.

            – Scott
            7 hours ago












          • What would you suggest with regards to re-working the three bullets?

            – methuselah
            7 hours ago











          • Darker type (maybe the blue with orange icons), perhaps larger.. hard to say without exploring it directly. Remember.. people may be 25-50 feet away.

            – Scott
            7 hours ago
















          @methuselah It's a quick and dirty mockup in Photoshop. There's zero point in me sharing anything. A) you couldn't use any of it for production and b) I trashed the file when I was done.

          – Scott
          7 hours ago





          @methuselah It's a quick and dirty mockup in Photoshop. There's zero point in me sharing anything. A) you couldn't use any of it for production and b) I trashed the file when I was done.

          – Scott
          7 hours ago













          Thanks. The team love it. They want to scrap what we currently have for it haha.

          – methuselah
          7 hours ago





          Thanks. The team love it. They want to scrap what we currently have for it haha.

          – methuselah
          7 hours ago













          Please realize, I know nothing about your company other than what the banner shows. And this was literally pieced together in 5 minutes using your PNG. Ideally, I'd rework the 3 bullets as well, but given I was starting with merely a PNG, I didn't bother to go into those.

          – Scott
          7 hours ago






          Please realize, I know nothing about your company other than what the banner shows. And this was literally pieced together in 5 minutes using your PNG. Ideally, I'd rework the 3 bullets as well, but given I was starting with merely a PNG, I didn't bother to go into those.

          – Scott
          7 hours ago














          What would you suggest with regards to re-working the three bullets?

          – methuselah
          7 hours ago





          What would you suggest with regards to re-working the three bullets?

          – methuselah
          7 hours ago













          Darker type (maybe the blue with orange icons), perhaps larger.. hard to say without exploring it directly. Remember.. people may be 25-50 feet away.

          – Scott
          7 hours ago





          Darker type (maybe the blue with orange icons), perhaps larger.. hard to say without exploring it directly. Remember.. people may be 25-50 feet away.

          – Scott
          7 hours ago













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          Claustrophobic text:



          I think your current issue is that this text is too similar to the text below. It's a tad bigger but otherwise same color, same weight. I would try to increase the differences so the eye doesn't get confused with those two levels.



          "Empty" space



          I would try to add some depth and create unity by reusing small elements in the illustrations lower in the banner. Those rounded strokes and maybe small cubes. If you make them bigger, it'll add depth, but do make sure the color isn't too contrasting so that the elements don't steal the main focus.



          You should also minimize this space by lowering the design in the banner to add a bit more space at the top. It's hard to control what people see around your banner so giving some breathing room to that logo can't hurt it, and it addresses the empty space concerns at the same time.



          Edit re: OP's comment: I do think there's too much space on the right of the three points. I would not align them to center, but I would push the group, towards the center and have its left edge sit aligned with something else on the banner, likely the left side of the left-hand character in your visual.






          share|improve this answer



























          • Thanks for the feedback! What are your thoughts on there being too much space to the right of the left justified stuff? Should the feature text be centred? Also, have added an extra image showing where the borders are.

            – methuselah
            10 hours ago






          • 1





            @methuselah I've updated my answer :)

            – Emilie
            9 hours ago











          • +1 "I would not align them to center" -- line for line centering is boring :)

            – Scott
            5 hours ago















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          Claustrophobic text:



          I think your current issue is that this text is too similar to the text below. It's a tad bigger but otherwise same color, same weight. I would try to increase the differences so the eye doesn't get confused with those two levels.



          "Empty" space



          I would try to add some depth and create unity by reusing small elements in the illustrations lower in the banner. Those rounded strokes and maybe small cubes. If you make them bigger, it'll add depth, but do make sure the color isn't too contrasting so that the elements don't steal the main focus.



          You should also minimize this space by lowering the design in the banner to add a bit more space at the top. It's hard to control what people see around your banner so giving some breathing room to that logo can't hurt it, and it addresses the empty space concerns at the same time.



          Edit re: OP's comment: I do think there's too much space on the right of the three points. I would not align them to center, but I would push the group, towards the center and have its left edge sit aligned with something else on the banner, likely the left side of the left-hand character in your visual.






          share|improve this answer



























          • Thanks for the feedback! What are your thoughts on there being too much space to the right of the left justified stuff? Should the feature text be centred? Also, have added an extra image showing where the borders are.

            – methuselah
            10 hours ago






          • 1





            @methuselah I've updated my answer :)

            – Emilie
            9 hours ago











          • +1 "I would not align them to center" -- line for line centering is boring :)

            – Scott
            5 hours ago













          3














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          3









          Claustrophobic text:



          I think your current issue is that this text is too similar to the text below. It's a tad bigger but otherwise same color, same weight. I would try to increase the differences so the eye doesn't get confused with those two levels.



          "Empty" space



          I would try to add some depth and create unity by reusing small elements in the illustrations lower in the banner. Those rounded strokes and maybe small cubes. If you make them bigger, it'll add depth, but do make sure the color isn't too contrasting so that the elements don't steal the main focus.



          You should also minimize this space by lowering the design in the banner to add a bit more space at the top. It's hard to control what people see around your banner so giving some breathing room to that logo can't hurt it, and it addresses the empty space concerns at the same time.



          Edit re: OP's comment: I do think there's too much space on the right of the three points. I would not align them to center, but I would push the group, towards the center and have its left edge sit aligned with something else on the banner, likely the left side of the left-hand character in your visual.






          share|improve this answer















          Claustrophobic text:



          I think your current issue is that this text is too similar to the text below. It's a tad bigger but otherwise same color, same weight. I would try to increase the differences so the eye doesn't get confused with those two levels.



          "Empty" space



          I would try to add some depth and create unity by reusing small elements in the illustrations lower in the banner. Those rounded strokes and maybe small cubes. If you make them bigger, it'll add depth, but do make sure the color isn't too contrasting so that the elements don't steal the main focus.



          You should also minimize this space by lowering the design in the banner to add a bit more space at the top. It's hard to control what people see around your banner so giving some breathing room to that logo can't hurt it, and it addresses the empty space concerns at the same time.



          Edit re: OP's comment: I do think there's too much space on the right of the three points. I would not align them to center, but I would push the group, towards the center and have its left edge sit aligned with something else on the banner, likely the left side of the left-hand character in your visual.







          share|improve this answer














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          • Thanks for the feedback! What are your thoughts on there being too much space to the right of the left justified stuff? Should the feature text be centred? Also, have added an extra image showing where the borders are.

            – methuselah
            10 hours ago






          • 1





            @methuselah I've updated my answer :)

            – Emilie
            9 hours ago











          • +1 "I would not align them to center" -- line for line centering is boring :)

            – Scott
            5 hours ago

















          • Thanks for the feedback! What are your thoughts on there being too much space to the right of the left justified stuff? Should the feature text be centred? Also, have added an extra image showing where the borders are.

            – methuselah
            10 hours ago






          • 1





            @methuselah I've updated my answer :)

            – Emilie
            9 hours ago











          • +1 "I would not align them to center" -- line for line centering is boring :)

            – Scott
            5 hours ago
















          Thanks for the feedback! What are your thoughts on there being too much space to the right of the left justified stuff? Should the feature text be centred? Also, have added an extra image showing where the borders are.

          – methuselah
          10 hours ago





          Thanks for the feedback! What are your thoughts on there being too much space to the right of the left justified stuff? Should the feature text be centred? Also, have added an extra image showing where the borders are.

          – methuselah
          10 hours ago




          1




          1





          @methuselah I've updated my answer :)

          – Emilie
          9 hours ago





          @methuselah I've updated my answer :)

          – Emilie
          9 hours ago













          +1 "I would not align them to center" -- line for line centering is boring :)

          – Scott
          5 hours ago





          +1 "I would not align them to center" -- line for line centering is boring :)

          – Scott
          5 hours ago











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          I would



          • center-align all text content

          • make the logo, main headline and website address 15% smaller, which would leave just about the right amount of whitespace around the edges

          • move the website address up and make it look like a blue rounded corners button on a white background

          • remove yellow and red borders, remove blue background

          • possibly add some more decoration around the text objects





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          • HI @Lucian, I've updated the banner since. Keen to hear your thoughts: imgur.com/a/Y5E5PBa

            – methuselah
            9 hours ago











          • Looking good man.

            – Lucian
            9 hours ago















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          I would



          • center-align all text content

          • make the logo, main headline and website address 15% smaller, which would leave just about the right amount of whitespace around the edges

          • move the website address up and make it look like a blue rounded corners button on a white background

          • remove yellow and red borders, remove blue background

          • possibly add some more decoration around the text objects





          share|improve this answer

























          • HI @Lucian, I've updated the banner since. Keen to hear your thoughts: imgur.com/a/Y5E5PBa

            – methuselah
            9 hours ago











          • Looking good man.

            – Lucian
            9 hours ago













          2














          2










          2









          I would



          • center-align all text content

          • make the logo, main headline and website address 15% smaller, which would leave just about the right amount of whitespace around the edges

          • move the website address up and make it look like a blue rounded corners button on a white background

          • remove yellow and red borders, remove blue background

          • possibly add some more decoration around the text objects





          share|improve this answer













          I would



          • center-align all text content

          • make the logo, main headline and website address 15% smaller, which would leave just about the right amount of whitespace around the edges

          • move the website address up and make it look like a blue rounded corners button on a white background

          • remove yellow and red borders, remove blue background

          • possibly add some more decoration around the text objects






          share|improve this answer












          share|improve this answer



          share|improve this answer










          answered 9 hours ago









          LucianLucian

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          • HI @Lucian, I've updated the banner since. Keen to hear your thoughts: imgur.com/a/Y5E5PBa

            – methuselah
            9 hours ago











          • Looking good man.

            – Lucian
            9 hours ago

















          • HI @Lucian, I've updated the banner since. Keen to hear your thoughts: imgur.com/a/Y5E5PBa

            – methuselah
            9 hours ago











          • Looking good man.

            – Lucian
            9 hours ago
















          HI @Lucian, I've updated the banner since. Keen to hear your thoughts: imgur.com/a/Y5E5PBa

          – methuselah
          9 hours ago





          HI @Lucian, I've updated the banner since. Keen to hear your thoughts: imgur.com/a/Y5E5PBa

          – methuselah
          9 hours ago













          Looking good man.

          – Lucian
          9 hours ago





          Looking good man.

          – Lucian
          9 hours ago


















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